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The time makes drowsy
my tired eyes
and closes
my mouth.

It is time
to wash the face
and to cancel
the lipstick.

It is time
to wash the face
and to cancel
the white wax.

My hands
are much too old
to the aim to scale still
this wall.

My eyes
are too much old
to the aim to see still
this public.

My mouth
is too much old
to the aim to still
laugh of myself.
©2005-2009 =kasuken
:iconkasuken:

Author's Comments

i wrote this poem last night...

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:iconglitterdarkstar:
sono colpita davvero.... ti facevo troppo scemo pr scrivere una cosa cosi bella....
(L'HAI COPIATA DI LA VERITà AHHAHA)
no davvero stupenda.

in particolare mi colpisce la frase:

My hands
are too much old
to the aim to scale still
this wall.

bella bravo davvero :clap:
:iconretinalmist:
:|


bello
complimenti


:+fav:

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older and ugly. retinal mist

I CSS nei Journal
:iconkasuken:
grazie Alè... anche per il fav.

:)

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To LoVe iS To LoSe, aNd tO LoSe iS To DiE

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:iconkasuken:
grazie...

:)

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To LoVe iS To LoSe, aNd tO LoSe iS To DiE

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:iconalt-end:
/me dedica NEVER LET ME DOWN AGAIN dei depesc mod a lele

bella poesia davvero.. e ricorda che non si è mai abbastanza vecchi ..

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the aperture shuts-too much exposure

mystock ~dagda79
:iconkasuken:
grazie...

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To LoVe iS To LoSe, aNd tO LoSe iS To DiE

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:iconglitterdarkstar:
ricorda anche che nn si è mai abbastanza ricchi.
:iconkasuken:
ah no... quello no di sicuro...

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To LoVe iS To LoSe, aNd tO LoSe iS To DiE

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:)

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the aperture shuts-too much exposure

mystock ~dagda79
:iconzeppelin-eye:
stupenda.. tristissima.. :+fav:

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